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About Me Member Experimental Photographer Jane BirchFemale/Denmark Recent Activity Deviant for 1 Year
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Poem

Mon Oct 12, 2009, 2:32 AM
Well, I did not know where to submit it. So I guess from now on, if I write something it will be submitted to my journal.
It is a little poem, or something, I wrote and I would really like if you commented on it. I haven't done much writing, so I’m quite new at this...

Here it goes; "Cry"

I need a place to cry, where no one can hear me
I need a place to cry, where no one can see me

Where did you go, where are you now
With nowhere else to go, I am here all alone
I am filling my heart with the tears from my mind
My eyes can not cry, cause my heart is achin

I need a place to cry, because you did not hear me
I need a place to cry, bacause you did not see me

Full of darkness, i have found my place
I am spilling my heart, emptying my soul
With a hole i my heart, I am sitting in tears
I have no fealing, I am without a heart.




Quite dark, but I like it. What do you think about it? Please comment!

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  • Current Residence: Copenhagen/Malmö
  • Interests: ackrobatics, photo, and friends
  • Favourite movie: moulin rouge, stardust
  • Favourite band or musician: Balstyrko, BliGlad, Corinne Bailey Rae, etc
  • Favourite artist: James Blunt, love his lyrics
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  • Favourite gaming platform: PC
  • Personal Quote: even a broken clock show the right time twice a day

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Hi
I am 18 years old danish girl, who lives in copenhagen/malmö, and here om DA I'm a experimental photographer.
I just bought a Canon IXUS 980, so there's going to come lot's of photos from me i the future.
I am a cirkus artist student at "the academy of untamed creativity". (That explains the nose...)

-Hvis du forstår dansk og syntes jeg lydder sjov eller bare lidt intressant, kan du finde mig på disse tre hjemmesider;

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