Well, I did not know where to submit it. So I guess from now on, if I write something it will be submitted to my journal.
It is a little poem, or something, I wrote and I would really like if you commented on it. I haven't done much writing, so I’m quite new at this...

Here it goes; "Cry"

I need a place to cry, where no one can hear me
I need a place to cry, where no one can see me

Where did you go, where are you now
With nowhere else to go, I am here all alone
I am filling my heart with the tears from my mind
My eyes can not cry, cause my heart is achin

I need a place to cry, because you did not hear me
I need a place to cry, bacause you did not see me

Full of darkness, i have found my place
I am spilling my heart, emptying my soul
With a hole i my heart, I am sitting in tears
I have no fealing, I am without a heart.




Quite dark, but I like it. What do you think about it? Please comment!

Love PipFish